De Waxing Horses Can Somone Edit My FRENCH Please (different Question)?

Can somone edit my FRENCH please (different question)? - de waxing horses

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Come to New York! The Big Apple!
Love New York!
Run! Do Marchezan in New York!

The view from the Empire State Building.
A Photogrpahers me with the wax statue of the Madonna "Madame Tussauds Wax Mueseum"
A Photogrpahers me in Times Square
A New York climate graph. It was very hot in summer!
The view of the Statue of Liberty Ferry
A horse and cart outside of Central Park

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Coming to New York! The Big Apple!
Love New York!
Run! Do not go to New York!

The view from the Empire State Building
A photo of me with the wax statue of Madonna in MaLady Tussauds
A Photogrpahers me in Times Square.
A climate of grpah New York. It was very hot in summer!
The sight of the Statue of Liberty ferry.
A car outside Central Park